After looking at your website Ive noticed a few things, I do realize its a work in progress so...
i think the black type doesnt lend it self well for your site, i know from looking at your other round of comps you had legibility issues, but I believe there is a happy medium between what you had and the black.
i also think your images are too digital compared to your website
i also think that the your page indicator line is a nice touch.
the bottom navigation to get between terms look ill placed, and accidental
will i only be able to go forward between the terms? what if i want to go back and review the terms?
it seems your site forces the user into too much of a linear navigation
some technical things which need to be fixed are the naviation's alignment to the boxes and the way the definitions fit on the page and their relationship to the background image
i think some of the navigational elements seem so disperate from the site and so digital. i think the hand done texture of your site are so nice but they seem to fail when it comes to the presentation of the information
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After looking at your website Ive noticed a few things, I do realize its a work in progress so...
i think the black type doesnt lend it self well for your site, i know from looking at your other round of comps you had legibility issues, but I believe there is a happy medium between what you had and the black.
i also think your images are too digital compared to your website
i also think that the your page indicator line is a nice touch.
the bottom navigation to get between terms look ill placed, and accidental
will i only be able to go forward between the terms? what if i want to go back and review the terms?
it seems your site forces the user into too much of a linear navigation
some technical things which need to be fixed are the naviation's alignment to the boxes and the way the definitions fit on the page and their relationship to the background image
i think some of the navigational elements seem so disperate from the site and so digital. i think the hand done texture of your site are so nice but they seem to fail when it comes to the presentation of the information
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